
Rain, rolling applause,
small hurrahs, thunder like jets
at low altitudes.
Cracks over treetops,
breaking barriers to sound,
with every fly by.
Small parachutists
rotate nimbly in descent,
buoyed by wax paper.
The newer streams rush
most smoothly atop old stones,
clinging to bottom.
I drink from the well,
I’m thankful for underground,
cold artesian pools.
I steam in cold air,
return again to the rain,
to once again pour.
I am a moist wisp,
mostly water and whimsy,
on the rocks, then neat.
© Carlos Chagall, 2013

I love this cascade of haiku, it’s brilliant really, the way that each haiku stands on its own like a single raindrop, but they all flow together into this one downpour–excellent! Thanks also for following my blog! 😀
Thank you for visiting and commenting, wordcoaster. I look forwarding to following you . You might enjoy Lithographs posted here https://carloschagall.com/2013/07/16/lithographs/ – 17 haiku structured as stanza 🙂 —–Chagall