
If September calls
tell her I’m still with Summer
stowing dreams away
© Carlos Chagall, 2013
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If September calls
tell her I’m still with Summer
stowing dreams away
© Carlos Chagall, 2013

You’ve got a real flair for this form–it seems to speak your brilliance, and vice versa.
Thank you, Michael. Your comment is very large – again, thank you. —–Chagall
perfection!
Thank you so much. I must step back and consider why this haiku appears to be hitting the spot. —–Chagall
i’m a little curious CC, did you come to any conclusions?
Wordplay, ambiguity, a romantic triangle 🙂 , and as Tiffany mentions below, nostalgia for childhood summers. —–Chagall
Just dreamy. I think we all wish we could stay in that spot with Summer. It’s the little child in us that connects with this, before things got so big and heavy.
Thank you. You could be right about the connection back to childhood, the excitement of that layover between school years, and all the promise that 3 months can hold. —–Chagall
brilliant!
Thank you, Celestine. —–Chagall