
All of creation falls
blurs on rainy panes
opaque and eternal
these gray days
little beads
at a crawl
descend
slowly
drip
by
drop
© Chagall 2014
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All of creation falls
blurs on rainy panes
opaque and eternal
these gray days
little beads
at a crawl
descend
slowly
drip
by
drop
© Chagall 2014

“opaque and eternal
these gray days”
Lovely.
Very nice job shaping the poem in the movement of the beads.
Thank you, Diana. Yes, a simple form that I thought effective. —Chagall
Almost always in most places
simple is best.
In this case the form helps
convey the desired tone, too.
One should not attempt a Bundt Cake in a loaf pan. 🙂 —CC