Running away, we outrace the comets,
then rest on our backs, at the southern pole;
stars, concentric orbits, clarions toll:
Life on this planet, as good as it gets.
My love for you hangs in mist, crystalline,
cascades in tickling ripples down your face,
rinses from inside out, the dust, this place.
There is no heaven, nor hell, this serene.
There is no place at all, there’s no bridge back.
I reel, mad dance, awestruck, struck dead, anew,
the last call. We didn’t make it did we?
“No my love, we both died in the attack.”
Cold wild winds blow hard in vain to renew
the calm before the storm, eternally.
© Carlos Chagall, 2013

So ethereal and lovely. It teeters on the edge of being rich with beauty and being frail and sad. Wondrous ride.
May you stay inspired and keep writing. *thumbs up*
Thank you, Iris, A bit contrived at the volta, I think, but it does have its share of lines to be mined and refined. —Chagall
A poem can always be refined, to paraphrase Paul Valéry. But a good first version is always a great way to start. 😉
Amen. 🙂 —Chagall
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