
In my dreams of her
we walk
through patches
of dense green
under sun so gold
that oddly casts
no shadow
she squats near
a stream
waves her hand
through the shallow
water
back and forth . . .
while I stare down at her
from too high above
I can hear
the quiet lapping
as a private darkness
closes around us
and I ask
Is there a heaven?
At that she stops
her paddling
abruptly
rises
taller than she was
in life
her face
just inches from mine
soft dimples
near her eyes
I’d forgotten
and she says
Yes, my dear
though everyone here
is starving
© Carlos Chagall, 2013

Wow…powerful.
Thank you, Rhonda. I will begin my real day with your comment in mind. —–Chagall
such wonderful imagery in this poem,
i love this passage:
her face
just inches from mine
soft dimples
near her eyes
I’d forgotten
ty for this, just beautiful poetry
Very much appreciated. —–Chagall
Impressive!
Thank you! —–Chagall
Emotive and powerful. You always deliver.
Thank you. Personally, this one gives me chills. —–Chagall
Absolutely beautiful and haunting! Thank you for directing me to your page, your writing is too good for me not to read it every day. Please, keep doing what you do because you do it well. Also, thank you for the kind words on my page!
I feel the same for you and your writing, as I do for a handful or 2 of others. A good new year’s resolution maybe, to make sure to read only the read-worthy – at a minimum. 🙂 Chagall