You remind me of someone you were, how you do that
so perfectly effortless
Evoke the we that we were
cue the salty sea air
Everything about then is beach-washed
designs, that’s how I remember
How could it be otherwise, the
other times we would soar
Just a little
bit more
We remind us
of then
Join me. Inhale – long –
and hold it gently.
ยฉ Chagall โ
So beautiful and intriguing ๐
Thank you, Celestine. —CC
Gently beautiful..
Thank you, Betty. We were talking about last lines, as you no doubt recall. In this case, I think the title suffices. Should have stopped there. —CC
Ah, but I like the ending to this. Every line is lovely.
BTW, do you prefer to be addressed here as CC, or Chagall? I’ve been calling you Carlos and hope you haven’t minded. It’s a good name.
Thank you again. Re: preferred monicker – any of those will work. And you are OK with Betty? —CC
I’m fine with Betty. (Though have never liked my name but am stuck with it. ๐ ) Thank you, Carlos.
Your name in total is quite melodic – sort of like “cellar door” in a way – two good B’s and Ts (Betty and Bright) and an intricate funky open-air sort of thing in the middle! ๐
Aww, thank you Carlos – I never thought of it like that. You’ve made me feel better about my name. ๐